ek ehsaas adhura sa
ek pyaas puri si...
tadap janam bhar ki
kwahish umar bhar ki
tum aaye yun..ki laga
tamanna hui puri si
is bechen arma ki....
kwahish umar bhar ki
maru par giri jo thi
wo bund alkeli si..
tujhme simat si gayi....
kwahish umar bhar ki
palken munde to laga
thi sapno ki jhadi si...
palkon ke tale, chupi...
khawhish umar bhar ki
Achhi composition...
ReplyDeletepalkon ke tale, chupi...ke bajaay 'dabi' kar den to aur bhi behtar ho jaayega...
Keep writing
U mentor me on this aspect Kamanwala
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